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The Dark Ones

Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 2:45 am
by Kidagakash85
Most of you have probably read my Atlantis fanfiction because it is so obnoxiously old. But for a long time I have been wanting to revise "The Dark Ones" and fix some things that bothered me about it. I have FINALLY done it!

The new version has fixed grammar and punctuation, better continuity, and some new scenes. I hope that, if you have read it and liked it, you will take the opportunity to re-read it; and if you've never read it, I'd greatly appreciate it if you would do so when you get a moment!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/542812/1/The_Dark_Ones

Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 2:01 am
by Pharoah
I would post some of the stuff i made, if i could find em, and finish em'

Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 3:36 pm
by RifleExpert
Wow... just let me improve my language stats))

Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:04 pm
by Pharoah
how do you mean?>

Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:54 pm
by RifleExpert
my language skills (!) is low to read more than 100 pages at day on foreign language. Too much brainwork for correct understanding. Im working to make myself read more freely))

Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 11:43 pm
by Pharoah
Interesting, hey something i noticed. and is interesting. Guess what has no limits!

Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 12:42 am
by Kidagakash85
What? :?

Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 1:20 am
by Pharoah
Octaves :) different levels of sound

Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 3:47 am
by Sappmer
I found this the other day on Fanfiction. The writing was fantastic and it was quite a gripping story line. I think if the writing and the story line hadn't of been so good I would have read the first page and left it, because Romances are not my type of Genre.

On a side note: Darn! I had spent ages coming up with a story line and when I finally had one and started writing it up, I find this. You went into the future and stole my idea :P. Only with drastic variations. Meh, I'm going to carry on writing it anyway, its a differant genre afterall.

Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 1:16 pm
by Kidagakash85
Thank you, Sappmer! I'm glad you liked it! *^_^* Sorry about the similarities...if it's any consolation, I can't tell you how many times my sister and I have read a book/watched a TV show/movie and come out saying, "They stole my idea!!!!!" :oops:

Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 4:21 pm
by Sappmer
lol its OK, I'm sure every plot line in the universe has been done many times. I will just have to be extra creative and find away to make it extra differant ;)

Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 8:05 pm
by Adenostar
Its very hard to find something that hasn't already been done somewhere. Though sometimes you can find things that haven't been done the way you think them up. I mean, if everything had already been done by someone else, none of us would have any original creativity left.

For my ATLE fanfic, I hook a girl up with Mole. Honestly, how many times have you seen THAT done? No one ever writes a love interest for him.

And recycled or borrowed plots isn't a bad thing, as long as you don't just copy someone elses work. If I can get my series finished, I plan on taking ideas from unmade ATLE series episodes. I got the ideas from wikipedia. Apparently one episode was supposed to feature the Loch Ness Monster, and I'm totally using that in one of my stories.