The Dark Ones

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#1 Post by **Kidagakash85** » Sun Jan 18, 2009 2:45 am

Most of you have probably read my Atlantis fanfiction because it is so obnoxiously old. But for a long time I have been wanting to revise "The Dark Ones" and fix some things that bothered me about it. I have FINALLY done it!

The new version has fixed grammar and punctuation, better continuity, and some new scenes. I hope that, if you have read it and liked it, you will take the opportunity to re-read it; and if you've never read it, I'd greatly appreciate it if you would do so when you get a moment!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/542812/1/The_Dark_Ones

#2 Post by **Pharoah** » Wed Jan 21, 2009 2:01 am

I would post some of the stuff i made, if i could find em, and finish em'

#3 Post by **RifleExpert** » Sat Jan 24, 2009 3:36 pm

Wow... just let me improve my language stats))

#4 Post by **Pharoah** » Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:04 pm

how do you mean?>

#5 Post by **RifleExpert** » Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:54 pm

my language skills (!) is low to read more than 100 pages at day on foreign language. Too much brainwork for correct understanding. Im working to make myself read more freely))

#6 Post by **Pharoah** » Sat Feb 14, 2009 11:43 pm

Interesting, hey something i noticed. and is interesting. Guess what has no limits!

#7 Post by **Kidagakash85** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 12:42 am

What?

#8 Post by **Pharoah** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 1:20 am

Octaves

different levels of sound

#9 Post by **Sappmer** » Fri Apr 10, 2009 3:47 am

I found this the other day on Fanfiction. The writing was fantastic and it was quite a gripping story line. I think if the writing and the story line hadn't of been so good I would have read the first page and left it, because Romances are not my type of Genre.

On a side note: Darn! I had spent ages coming up with a story line and when I finally had one and started writing it up, I find this. You went into the future and stole my idea

. Only with drastic variations. Meh, I'm going to carry on writing it anyway, its a differant genre afterall.

#10 Post by **Kidagakash85** » Sat Apr 11, 2009 1:16 pm

Thank you, Sappmer! I'm glad you liked it!

Sorry about the similarities...if it's any consolation, I can't tell you how many times my sister and I have read a book/watched a TV show/movie and come out saying, "They stole my idea!!!!!"

#11 Post by **Sappmer** » Sat Apr 11, 2009 4:21 pm

lol its OK, I'm sure every plot line in the universe has been done many times. I will just have to be extra creative and find away to make it extra differant

#12 Post by **Adenostar** » Sat Apr 11, 2009 8:05 pm

Its very hard to find something that hasn't already been done somewhere. Though sometimes you can find things that haven't been done the way you think them up. I mean, if everything had already been done by someone else, none of us would have any original creativity left.

For my ATLE fanfic, I hook a girl up with Mole. Honestly, how many times have you seen THAT done? No one ever writes a love interest for him.

And recycled or borrowed plots isn't a bad thing, as long as you don't just copy someone elses work. If I can get my series finished, I plan on taking ideas from unmade ATLE series episodes. I got the ideas from wikipedia. Apparently one episode was supposed to feature the Loch Ness Monster, and I'm totally using that in one of my stories.